tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31131263.post7388646118348911042..comments2023-12-20T16:06:57.929-05:00Comments on Don't Tell the Donor.org: Paper claims Bill Gates 'reneges' on $2 million pledgeUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31131263.post-1105709732164043462008-03-26T10:28:00.000-04:002008-03-26T10:28:00.000-04:00You are right Sam... the post was full of typos an...You are right Sam... the post was full of typos and bad grammer... but wasn't it a cute picture of Bill Gates with the Queen?!?1"a fundraiser"https://www.blogger.com/profile/14336814687687466381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31131263.post-28751271742180657552008-03-25T22:06:00.000-04:002008-03-25T22:06:00.000-04:00Here is an posting on the renege. http://gateskeep...Here is an posting on the renege. http://gateskeepers.civiblog.org/blog/_archives/2008/3/24/3596624.htmlAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31131263.post-46580804619881431812008-03-25T14:48:00.000-04:002008-03-25T14:48:00.000-04:00This is one of the most poorly written pieces I ha...This is one of the most poorly written pieces I have ever seen. Here are the details of how poorly written it is.<BR/><BR/>"...Prince Charles' charity named, the Technology Leadership Group, a subsidiary of the Prince's Trust."<BR/><BR/>The word "named" is not needed and indeed makes this sentence gramatically incorrect. <BR/><BR/>"Sources claim that Microsoft agreed verbally to commit an additional £1million was apparently secured for the charity's efforts to train young entrepreneurs."<BR/><BR/>This sentence is also incorrect, employing incorrect forms. The "was apparently secured" verb demands a noun and none is given as written.<BR/><BR/>It should read, "Sources claim that Microsoft's verbal commitment for an additional £1million was apparently secured for the charity's efforts to train young entrepreneurs."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com